In The Forests Of Dreams. Poem by Rebecca Navarre

In The Forests Of Dreams.

Rating: 5.0


Snow white, and rose red. Blossoming. Out
picking berries, stopped, and so wondrously
said. Who knows what lies ahead. Flowers
nod, and make their beds. Busily, before
critters tread. As a quietness sheds. Dwarfs
start gathering along, where babbling brooks
have led. Over the dark towering, mountain
heads. To mysterious, hidden castles. Where
gallant princes, under moonlight, wed. Skies
open, and love spreads.. As mother calls out,
Here Snow white, Rose red.

Tuesday, March 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: fun,silly,stories
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 12 February 2022

Skies open, and love spreads.. Lovely expression. I absolutely agree with Unni ji that it's a captivating piece of poetry....top score!

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Unnikrishnan E S 12 February 2022

Wow! Becca, you lead us through a fairy tale move… most captivating… you made me a little kid again. Loved it.

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Susan Williams 14 March 2018

Oh! Love the way you led us step by gentle step into the realm of dreams populated by dwarfs and princes and beautiful young maidens.- -gorgeous feel to this piece, Rebecca. Now if only I could find a pot of gold behind that magical tree over yonder.... :)

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Rebecca Navarre 15 March 2018

Goodness :) Thank You! ! ! Susan, For Such An Ever So Beautiful Reply! ! ! ! ! :) And Thank You For Bringing Me Smiles! ! ! ! ! You Are An Incredibly Talented Poetess! ! ! ! ! That Holds, An Ever Such True Beauty Of True Gold, In Heart Your Kindness Shows! ! ! ! ! :) Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! ! :)

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