In My Phantasm Poem by Sadiqullah Khan

In My Phantasm

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She showered like waters from heaven
Emptied my mind for expression
Music is broken in the formulae
Galen or another sage
From the cage the heart was bursting
Into desires so much in your laps
Like roses of black and white color
What holds you in the sweetness
Your tongue now speak angels
Devil’s eye had on the brow
Unquenched thirst for the fountain
Whom shall you lead my love
From the bosom to the eternity
Through the desert of smoothness
Like having seen no spring for ages
Like storm then I take your dunes
Every particle in your existence
Shall have the energy of my lust
I shall not admit it as my fault
As you shall not admit your beauty
What causes me in flames inside
I see you naked in my phantasm
31/8/2009

Monday, August 31, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 03 September 2009

Skillful use of simile and metaphor. A very emotional piece. Your creative imagination and your rich vocabulary carry the day. I give you ten. Warm regards, Sandra

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Ejaz Khan 31 August 2009

Vivid imagination, sensuous and yet classic, a good one!

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