In My Mind Poem by Evy Moore

In My Mind

Rating: 4.4


Trapped eternally in an abstrusive puzzle
Silenced constantly by an unseen muzzle
Suddenly cringing from fear of uncertainty
Roughly covered in exclusive security
Twisted and turned like two oblique angles
My emotions run straight but my thought slowly tangles
My world strangely placid but only laconically
My chance to escape now ends abruptly

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Reynolds 16 September 2006

Nice use of the language here, Evy. You definitely have the poet's touch. Danny

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 15 September 2006

Very well expressed interp of Quandry at a most tensing level....Your astute attention to image is quite impresive....Soundly tight Structure places a positive punctuation mark on this succinctly abstract work'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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