In A Text? Poem by Jamal ugh

In A Text?

Rating: 5.0


I text you hi
You say goodbye
I reply whats wrong
you say this been on to long

I hide my sadness
and reply with madness
'lol, oh ok i understand'
'hope you find another man'

Then the wait i cant deal
then you reply, the pain is sealed
'oh i already found someone new'
I think, so soon, did i even matter to you?

I reply 'I hope it works out'
harder to hide pain, no doubt
'yeah I hope you feel better one day
eh, i was convinced, I was worthless anyway.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 13 May 2011

Awesome work. Great sentiments with nice style. Great write indeed. I rate it 10. TFS. Please read and rate my poem 'A deal in helplessness' on page 1.

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