Immortal Poem by Aury Cecile

Immortal

Rating: 4.0


What is time but to a vampire?
It's like bottled milk
With years to expire

What is a second to the undead?
It's my fiancee
90 years before wed

Length of a moment to the immortal?
The stretch of a trip
Through a galaxy portal

Whats a regret to the long-living?
Quick to mistake
Slowly forgiving

Some may despise it
Its this life they dread
But oh how I wish
To own it instead

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subham Dutta 06 August 2008

Hi Aury Cecile, I read your this poem. In my point of view it is very good.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 10 June 2008

Good rhyming and well crafted poem..............

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