Illusions Poem by justin walker

Illusions

Rating: 5.0


this world we live in can be
an illusion to our eyes. people
who say they love you can
push you off a cliff if they had a
chance. we see things in our
life that could make the
strongest man on earth commit
suicide. we learn to deal with
these emotions in our own way.
some decide suicide, some decide
to cut themselves, and the worse
one, the one that is the worse. the
people that hold it in to let it
explode. it not only hurts the target
but it also hurts the source. it may
hurt you physically but the worse pain
for me is the mental pain that it causes.
it also hurts everyone around you when
you blow like an atomic bomb. its also
the best illusion this world has learned
to create.we act like evrything is fine,
but if you look hard enough you can
see through these stained glass
windows. its not that hard if you take
the time to look that hart. why do we
do this? well in my theory i think we do
it because we want to be normal. while
we actually know that we will never be
normal. some people learn to cope
with their unusual behavior or personality.
those are the kids that have been
through a lot of stuff in their life. we look
up to these kids that are mentally strong.
they help us through troubles at home, at
school, with friends, or even with
relationships. these are the people who
can look through illusions and can even
destroy them. thats the people we need
more of. to destroy these everyday illusions
that pop up into our lives.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mimi Fakhira 29 December 2008

First of all, sorry about your past. Second of all, you did an amazingly good job! Illusions just keep appearing before our eyes, clouding our mind. The only way to fight it is think straight, not to let our minds wander around in blind fantasy. A steady flow, the words keeping to the beat and, hey,10 for you! What else? !

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 18 November 2008

Illusory world, how true, .......as satan covers our eyes.

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Anjali Sinha 18 November 2008

yeah you are true----illusions often we live in this illusionary world we dont see the real things--its virtual for us not realistic good write and smooth flowing ++10 love anju

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