If You Were To Love Me Poem by Mark Stone

If You Were To Love Me

Rating: 3.7


If you were to love me.
I would be strong I'd be weak
I'm sure we would lose sleep
I'd be yours for you to keep
For ever and a day I've heard them say
Tell death do us part
What A spark must be in your hart
To ignite such a flame
And I will proclaim I feel the same
as we walk beside the ocean speaking
of devotion with waves of emotion.
Until the night turns to day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Tyler 16 December 2006

I disliked your tone on the forum and I've made that very clear, however, I'm judging the poem here and it is really pleasant. This shows good use of internal rhyme and lovely turns of phrase. Well done

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