If You Ever Walk Away From Me, , Poem by angeline snowboy

If You Ever Walk Away From Me, ,



she never thought that she'll never find her true love, until one day that boy came along, she thought about the future with him, but that boy had to admit that she wasnt good enough for him, he didnt want to hurt her but then he realized he did, the girl went home locked herself in her room thinking about taking her own life, the phone rang it was him he said 'honey i hope you understand but dont try to do something bad to yourself', she cared so much for him guess ge was playing a game, she had to admit he was good at acting, but him hurting her? that was some game she had tears all over her face, that boy came to her place, her mother answerd the door he askd for her then her mother went came knocking on her door, she realized that she had run away the mothers heart was slowly breaking, but then the next day came he went to school, she was nowhere to be found he was so worried like he never was before, then they bumpd in with each other he hugd her likr he never did before, he told her that he was so sorry she just ignored it, she knew that shes gonna get playd again then she told him that shes gonna take her own life at midnight, he tryd to stop her but as she walkd away, he fell down to his knees he died by a heart break, a note was in his hand it said 'if you ever walk away from me i would just die'.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 14 June 2009

what a sweet piece of writing..impressed from.. its interesting... and heart felt and written professionally..well done.. really rich one..10+++++++++

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This is like a short story very very well written keep writing Please take time to check out some of my poems Thank you! !

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