If Not A Rainbow, Silver Line Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

If Not A Rainbow, Silver Line

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I tried hard— make me feel somewhat proud,
Ended up still to be a dark cloud,
Then, to be a rainbow
In someone's grey sorrow,
That too oh turning sour
For not being so dour,
Hope, a dream to be a silver line is no loud.
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Musings |09.06.2020|
Topic: cloud, rainbow, sorrow, silver-line, dream

Friday, June 19, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: cloud,dream,rainbow
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A Subhashita (words well worth)in Sanskrit says: if you can't walk all the way to a goodly deed, walk a little, if not far. For, one on the right path can't be lost.
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Then, to be a rainbow In someone's grey sorrow, A marvellous piece of poem...10

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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