If My Heart Was A Door Poem by Joen Coronel

If My Heart Was A Door

Rating: 4.5


A winter moon in a frosty sky
I’m a seagull that’s soaring high
Sweet as crescent moon, crazy it may seem
That you shot me with your ethereal moonbeam
Your magical touch was so surreal
As you’re shrouded with a mythical feel
In the blink of an eye, you transformed
Into a creature with an eerie form
If my heart was a door
I’d let someone to open it once more
With a weirdly-carved padlock
To unlock my imprisoned feelings stuck
Last night you entered to my door with awe
Your heartbeat was naughty, that noisy show
I burst into spectrum of colors of rainbow
And you’re wonder-struck that you wanted it to know
Introvert lady, don’t be too shy
You’re always welcome and no need to ask why
Cause if you only knew I’m always high
When you’re inside my heavenly sky
If my heart was a door
Paint in with vibrant red color
Don’t let the doorknob rusty
Cause you won’t open it easily
My heart was an entrance for your sanctuary
Inside this was a choir of angels singing a symphony
Group of ballerinas dancing in harmony
Painters and sculptors working with finest artistry
If one day you’d lost your way
You already knew where you gonna stay
But my heart was a heart, not a door
It will only happen if…….

Thursday, April 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: imagination,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is about a man who enters into the sea of reveries to where he visualizes his strong love to a girl. He also mentioned there that those things would only be possible if his heart was a door, hence the title.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 29 October 2015

Lovely romantic piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned in poetic diction with conviction. An insightful poem without good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Joen. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Rutvi Padhy 03 May 2015

@JoenCoronel Nup: -)

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Joen Coronel 04 May 2015

must be asian. Asians are kinda great when it comes to lit.

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Rutvi Padhy 03 May 2015

Wow *_* now tats......*speechless* 'if my heart was door' beautiful thought....I cn read it again n again.....amazing.....the whole poem...n the last line....wow: -D

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Joen Coronel 03 May 2015

Thanks. Are you a native American?

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