I Wouldn'T Ask More Poem by Pradip Chattopadhyay

I Wouldn'T Ask More

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Do I see flicker of a shine
being left without a choice
when I sing to her the first line
and she has to lend her voice.

Girl I needed to see your face
but you hid it for too long
denied me that one happiness
till I broke into a song.

From you I needed just one line
see once your parted lip
to make you girl all of mine
sink into your eyes deep.

Sing a line girl sing me one
promise I wouldn't ask more
I would treasure it when you're gone
hold one line in heart's core.

Wednesday, August 20, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: song
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 21 August 2014

Very nicely composed and it has all the sweetness of a song...........profound

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Kavya . 21 August 2014

wow wat a romantic poem....loved it.........loved the lines see once your parted lip to make you girl all of mine- sink into your eyes deep I think she had some obligations at her end due to which she was hiding her face for too long and hence avoided the parting of lips: -)

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Hardik Vaidya 20 August 2014

Denied me that one happiness, till I broke into a song. It takes a lot to write that Chattopadhyay, loved it.

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