I Won't Mind Tell A Lie Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

I Won't Mind Tell A Lie



I won't mind telling a lie
If it gets justified;
If it could bring forth
Something glorified

My heart is loaded with
Disturbing pains inside
A truth this; but I won't let
My hopes dwell beside

Would house them inside lies
Where no pains, visualized!

12th July 2010

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ken E Hall 13 July 2010

Very strong meanings here 'Disturbing pains inside a truth' My own thoughts see a young kid in a cinema and a man in the next seat acosts the boy and it seals inside him...he cannot tell his mum beside him, , , , , also a thousand boys in the church same thing...I won't mind tell a lie....++++10 thanks regards

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Yelena M. 17 July 2010

A tight and edgy piece to ponder on, Kesav..Thanks for sharing your poetry. With best wishes, Yelena

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Sandra Martyres 17 July 2010

A rather disturbing write Kesav - which leaves the reader with a heap of unanswered questions....

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 18 July 2010

Abstract canvas with red stokes of lies and green strokes of truth…but in white paint on white paper ‘Pain’ speaking much… congrats for sharing Sir Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 hf

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Ratnaprabha Raykar 25 July 2010

white lies call they, but prudence is neccessary to know when to stop

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Kolawole Ajao 25 July 2010

I will join you tell a thousand lies to help save some souls. Wisdom is what this contains. Continue!

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you have captured the fight..the tussle going on within so very well...i agree hope can be save inside without a pain

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Mamta Agarwal 21 July 2010

Lies, pain, hope- you have with great dexterity captured human condition. we try to cope with pain by hoping tomorrow will be a better day. that too is a lie we tell ourselves for its too difficult to handle prolonged pain. your last two lines give away your thought very poignantly as well as stoically. a clever play on words, Kesav. hope and lies belong together. quite an existential theme.i take it to my fav to ponder over... 10 Mamta

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Indira Renganathan 19 July 2010

I think most of us are of this kind only...'smiling face with heavy heart' very well penned....thank you

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