Triauna Hall

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I Wonder


Sometimes I wonder, am I really wanted?
Do people really like me? Or am I just a disappointment?
Now I feel so stupid, to think people actually like me.
It's funny; I feel the same vibe from my own family.
I know I'm right, I can tell because they only use me.
Abuse their positions, accuse me, and then refuse me.
Sometimes I wonder, is life worth living?
It's like hell, or maybe worse.
But however, I'm living through a curse.
And my mind is the witch, that won't go away.
Constant harassment that claims its stay.
She moved in and made her place.
Despite the fact that I needed that space.
Sometimes I wonder, does anyone care?
Even at times when someone's there.
Are they even listening? Hearing me talk?
Or am I just a joke for you to mock?
Nice, I knew it, this was all a game.
This time, I know who's to blame.
It's the ones with all the problems and made me the solution.
Then Came my turn, and scattered like pollution.
Then gets mad when I say I don't care.
Oh well, I guess, Life isn't fair.

Submitted: Thursday, July 19, 2012
Edited: Friday, August 03, 2012

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  • Rookie - 1 Points Katy Lue (7/19/2012 7:32:00 PM)

    I wonder the same thing sometimes......really well written with haunting questions and real emotion. Its a sad pondering poem and I really like it! Very good job! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 340 Points Captain Cur (7/19/2012 7:27:00 PM)

    Moments are where the best feelings and poems come from.
    Write and vent, people are listening! (Report) Reply

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