I Wish Poem by Susannah Bryan

I Wish



I wish I never loved you
I wish I never cared
I wisd I didn't hurt you
I wish it wasn't fair
I wish I could love you
So you'd always be there

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dillon Gay 16 October 2008

So simple, so cliched, but it looks like an effort was made. 'I Wish.' A powerful phrase. This poem is better off short so it can have a lasting effect. Great Job.

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