I Want To Learn Poem by Kavitha Krishnamurthy

I Want To Learn

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Oh gritty mountains, I admire your determination
Always standing still
Be it a heavy rain or a strong wind
Be it a hot sunny day or a chilled dark night
You always remain focused and do not lose hope
I want to learn so much from you

Oh unwearied clouds, I admire your patience
Collecting million droplets
You wait till you become strong
And when the moment is right
You give us a great rainfall
I want to learn so much from you


Oh compassionate sky, I admire your kindness
Having an open heart
You provide space for the sun, moon
And for the stars and the clouds
You show kindness to one and all
I want to learn so much from you

Oh unified stars, I admire your unity
Blending with your buddies
You form a group of your own
Having such a team spirit
You always stay together
I want to learn so much from you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Peter A. Crowther 23 December 2006

I like the feeling of fellowship with the universe and its elements in this nicely structured poem

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Catastrophe King 11 December 2006

YOU just DID! ! Keep writing..... you write well.... There is a touch of innocense in your compositions.

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