I Wanna Be There, Do All What I Can, Only For Her! ! Poem by Abdallah Gamal

I Wanna Be There, Do All What I Can, Only For Her! !

Rating: 4.5


What if the sun said ' Sorry, I'm not coming today '? !
What if the earth loved the moon, and couldn't even say? !

What if our glowing sky wasn't true? !
What if my beautiful life was without you? !

I wanna be there, do all what I can, only for you!
I wanna be there, because I can't dream without you!
I wanna be there, because you're the one who can make my life glows!
I wanna be there, just because I do love you! !

Now! I'm on the summit of the mountain saying to my lifelong pain ' Good bye! '.
playing with the glowing stars, flying freely in the sky.
That's because I said what was stuck in my heart, I was about to die.
So I put the start of our story, and let my birds to fly.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sherry Painter 22 August 2012

Very well writen, Abdallah! Nice, good to see a new one from you, can't waite to read the next poem of yours :) ! ! ! ! ! !

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Persephone Taylor 22 August 2012

I love the ryhme scheme and description!

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Mj Lemon 31 December 2016

A message of profound love, yearning, and joy. This is a wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Khaoula Basty 11 August 2015

You taught me how to live, how to love, how to sacrifice. Till you came into my life, my world turned to a paradise. I wrote our story on the walls of my heart, to tell it to our children, to teach them what true love is, and let our souls rest in Heaven Waw I relly enjoy it when I'm reading It is well penned Bravo! !

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Cierrah Smiles 03 September 2012

I like the first two verses... how you asked a question. I have tried poems like this and it didn't work but yours did. Good Job.

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Mary Medina 29 August 2012

'So I put the start of our story, and let my birds fly' That's my favorite line.

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Lenore Lee 22 August 2012

I completely adore this poem. Such beauty and feeling. I loved! ! !

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