Ahmed Toslim

I Swear - Poem by Ahmed Toslim

lord mahadeva, his beloved ganga and the lone star
all green down there and the dark, of them i swear
hey the other lord of silence, the time you speak up
being honest, this slave moves on so far, a bit so far ~

Topic(s) of this poem: love hurts

Comments about I Swear by Ahmed Toslim

  • Freshman - 824 Points V P Mahur (3/25/2014 2:29:00 PM)

    Nice one dear Ahmed.
    Have you read any of my poems.
    I am sure you will like them.
    Please reply. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 20 Points Ahmed Toslim (3/25/2014 1:46:00 PM)

    Thank You, i guess poem this will get few more lines along. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 70,570 Points Gajanan Mishra (3/25/2014 1:41:00 PM)

    being honest, good writing, (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 25, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 26, 2014

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