Linda Winchell

Rookie - 31 Points (still working on it! / Chicago Illinois)

“i Saw My Baby Crying” - Poem by Linda Winchell

I saw my baby crying
What has made my baby blue?
Could it be the love I’ve forgotten to show her?
Was it allowing her, to go love someone new?

She use to smile at me and give big hugs
But with time and distance in between.
Her love and hugs for me disappeared
They’re no longer to be seen.

Does she love maybe another?
Is this what’s going on?
I need to find out from her rose colored lips
Of which I had once been so fond.

I need to take some time to be
The person she once knew.
And hear the words for me once again
Her telling me, ” My Love is for only you.”

Comments about “i Saw My Baby Crying” by Linda Winchell

  • Edward Kofi Louis (8/19/2016 5:12:00 PM)

    Caregiving! To be the person she once knew. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

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  • (8/19/2016 11:15:00 AM)

    Heartiest Congrats for inking such a marvelous poem expressing a question mark in the mind of a mother about weakening of love bond for her in her baby's mind and also for it's rightful selection as the member Poem of the Day. (Report) Reply

  • (8/19/2016 3:23:00 AM)

    this feeling of Separation is experienced by many parents. It is an important topic
    and very well presented too. Well done for your poem of the Day.
    I enjoyed it very much.
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  • Rajnish Manga (8/19/2016 2:01:00 AM)

    Lovely poem with a perfect rhyme, immensely wonderful and awesome. It also suggests a bit about child psychology and the understanding - or the lack of it - between a mother and her baby. Thanks for sharing. I quote:
    She use to smile at me and give big hugs
    They’re no longer to be seen.
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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (4/24/2009 8:52:00 AM)

    Does she love maybe another?
    Is this what’s going on? .....................yes there you are, love as it changes in time and space yet by its magical winds, a mystery by its own form yet undeciphered, wonderful write by imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 21, 2009

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