I Remember You Poem by A B Faniki

I Remember You

Rating: 5.0


I will alway remember you, your
that girl next door with
the dimples and most beautiful

smile that I have ever
seen on any pretty mouth.
I remember vividly that faithful

day like yesterday when I declare
'I love you', you laugh with both
hands covering your mouth and a delightful

sound filled my ears and the air.
before you finished laughing beneath
the beautiful stars, that wonderful

night I knew from that moment and hour
that; for you I would move the earth
and stars to spell your name in full.

Tuesday, December 24, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: you,door,girl,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A B Faniki 12/25/2019. All right reserved
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 27 January 2020

that; for you I would move the earth and stars to spell your name in full.... a beautifully writ love song to one's love.

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A B Faniki 27 January 2020

Thank you, Inspired by a childhood crush of mine, who happen to be the girl nextdoor in my neighborhood

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Kingsley Egbukole 24 December 2019

A powerful love poem beautifully put together for an interesting reading...10++.

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Kostas Lagos 24 December 2019

A beautiful love poem! Excellent!

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Chima Ononogbu 24 December 2019

Really moving and poetically flowing. Thanks for sharing.

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A B Faniki 31 December 2019

My pleasure. Thank you for taking the time to read the poem and for lovely comment. Cheers and happy holiday

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