I Never Think When I Put Down A Poem. Poem by Liza Sud

I Never Think When I Put Down A Poem.



I never think when I put down a poem.
It is not thoughts or instincts that may rule.
that is the spiral, lightining or emotion.
So we intepret it in different clues.

Your poem is beautiful. A sense it.
It has its own integrity and view.
But God for you is never in the center.
And that for me is breaking and is cruel.

Yes, I felt warmth when I was reading your lines.
you tried to mix up small light with great Light.
I don't expect you think as I do - No!
You write as you got used to - so please write.

I want you to be more free in your topic.
You made this poem adjusting to my style.
That is indeed an answer to a Monu-
ment, And I saw the Light inside the lines!

Friday, February 3, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
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