I Need To Break Poem by Ratan Bhattacharjee

I Need To Break

Rating: 5.0


I Need to Break
Daylight breaks again
I could not sleep last night
When the moon declined in the Western sky

My mind was exhausted, body weary
I lay awake thinking
I need to break from the bonds
But I am unsure
I was unable to break anything
But O I need to break!

I need to break the dreams
And all that I longed for.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 21 March 2010

Why break not? Tired be not? Why not be Slog…. swig? … Let Poet’s be dreamer of every thing… But your finish is: ‘…I need to break the dreams/And all that I longed for….’ You wanted your fancy of, ‘…My mind was exhausted, body weary…’ to be curbed….and the message lies here…focused thru your vigilant psychic eyes … Unbuckle Unshackle and feel the freedom and out of boredom...fuse with buoyancy akin to Salvation =Mukti 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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