........I Miss You Poem by lady grace

........I Miss You

Rating: 4.5


promises stranded to dry lands of hope
guns and roses...thorns and bulletproofs
wildlife mountain vines...beauty of nature
touches are written...buried in the sand....

can't use my strength
nor convince them by charm
never the ink i wanted to refill
theirs are stones, theirs are hard...

in the morning, i saw mountain dews
fresh like lettuce...in garden they grow
somehow...mists become tears
to our desires....no one hears

you walk in that direction...i follow
then u run, ...i did
until i cant see you....i can't see you...

you left me with your people
with people who can't understand what life is
who can't understand how to grow...

so tired...i want to sleep
beauty..i can't admire anymore
my life is useless....please run back...to see you once more

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Diane Montemayor 04 October 2016

Dear Lady, A heartfelt poem.... My life is useless, nope, do not just rely on loving someone, there are many great things on earth where you can find real happiness and love.. Wait with your eyes and a heart opens wide and you will see... Kalimutan mo na lang po sya... Salamat, diane

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Don Maciver 05 March 2012

You share a demonstrative gift of deeply felt emotions in your writing. I will return to enjoy more soon!

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Miriam Maia Padua 06 October 2011

touching write... I can feel the pain and the emotions pouring... i like the way you mold this piece really touching, redlepzzz

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Eyan Desir 21 September 2011

lovely poetry..good job

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Seema Chowdhury 31 January 2011

this is so beautiful and touchy. i like the choice of your words and phrases. it just flows so magically and naturally. thanks for sharing.

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