I'm Trying Poem by LUZAAN de Bruyn

I'm Trying



Trying to stay alive,
Fighting to survive,
Struggling to breathe,
My thoughts wants me to leave.
Feels like I'm drowning,
Feels like my soul is dying,
I'm trying,
I'm trying,
I AM TRYING! ! ! ! !
The emptiness is weakening,
The thoughts deafening,
The memories fading,
My heart aching.
Feels like I'm drowning,
I'm trying,
I'm trying,
I'M TRYING! ! !
Yeah my soul is dying
But I'm fighting,
I'M TRYING,
I'M TRYING,
I AM TRYING! ! ! ! !

Wednesday, September 4, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: awakening,deaths,depression,fighting,suicide
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I'm fighting my major depressive disorder the only way I know how
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walker 07 September 2019

The only answer is to keep trying, easier said than done, I know. A powerful, sincere poem.

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