I'M Tired Poem by Karen Brogden

I'M Tired

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I'm Tired
From time to time I caught that look in your eyes that said I'm tired

you’ve done what you can and been there for me when I needed you but....
I'm Tired
For all the time we've walked you've talked! I thank you believe me I enjoyed them but.......
I'm Tired
I've been a good listener but I think now you need to listen to me.....
I'm Tired

Please believe me when my eyes say I love you, I do but.......
I'm Tired
Now is my time, I have had my day in the sun, but be brave and be strong know your love for me will never fade but.....
I'm Tired.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adrian Wait 01 April 2008

This is an excellent poem, keep writing, and thanks for your work.

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Philip Housiaux 14 March 2008

Very much a private poem with repetitive structure metaphor for strength of need. well done

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