I'M Not Ok Poem by jan aryton

I'M Not Ok

Rating: 4.5


my life, my love,
my pain, my endless hell.
my life.

Tuesday, August 12, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: depression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
OK, so erm this is my first attempt at a poem so please go easy on me, i wrote this in a moment of sadness and felt i wanted to share it so... here goes
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 23 November 2014

A well encapsulated train of thoughts that captures the frustration felt. I like the penning of the poem, short but powerful and bristling with meaning. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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