I M M E A S U R A B L E Poem by Camelia Dragusin

I M M E A S U R A B L E



The immeasurability cries its frialty 
Join me in death, wonder and sorrow
For our caresses are greater than infinity

Tuesday, June 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: infinity,nature,romance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jefferson Carter 06 June 2017

Camelia, it's almost always better to show (vivid images, figures of speech) than to tell (abstractions like sorrow and infinity) . Read some good contemporary poetry in English (Mary Oliver) for inspiration and guidance. If you'd like, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Let me know how you like it. Yrs, JC

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Camelia Dragusin

Camelia Dragusin

Transilvania, România
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