I'M Late Poem by Jean Barcena

I'M Late

Rating: 5.0


I woke up early in the morning
Rushing to the bathroom and take a bath
fixing my bed but sometimes I do not

Even if I woke up early
But I still come to school late
That's one of my weaknesses
Waking up early but moving slowly

Almost of the time I walk from home going to school
When I see things in the street which catches my eye
I usually stop to it
Looking to it and forget what time is it

After how many minutes
When I found out that I was already staying there quiet a long time
I usually running fast going to school or just walking fast so that I can get not late

But when I'm in the gate
I saw students standing and singing the national anthem
I told myself, Damn! Self that's what you've got!

It really made me shy
When I enter somebody saw me
Maybe they are saying and asking?
Is she's really a punctual student?

Thursday, June 26, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: day
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
ryan lemoncito 24 June 2019

Nice very Nice... Lahat yata narasan tanungin ang sarili kong bakit ganito oh ganun, pero alam natin na tayo at tayo lang din ang nakaka alam sa sagot. 👍

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Melvin Banggollay 10 July 2008

I like this poem as it truly reflects realities of student life. Keep writing more and I know you can share more lovely and meaningful poems to all readers in PH. take care and Napakaganda mo kaya tuloy ako'y na inlove sa iyo. melvin

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Marvin Brato 01 July 2008

Nice poem portraying what most students do, well being young and curious about many things is part of growing up! Do not be late next time, ok? A 10

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A little feeling of guilt appears in this poem: I'm late at school, gets distracted easily. At school I was like this...Well, I saw the picture of this author who has a nice smile...it consoles myself.

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Apple Jean L. Aba 26 June 2008

hmmmmm apple ha/ kaw na ged!

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