I Love You But I'M Done! Poem by SINDISWA S. MNGUNI C'NDY

I Love You But I'M Done!



Does love means hurting?
If it does why didnt you tell,
The time you introduced it or
You must have forgotten...?

I wasted my 32 weeks
for such a bad ending
If only I knew wouldn't have
but here I am, are you listening?

Remember 24/11/09
I still remember,
that is/was my birthday
its sad you've forgotten...

I have to leave now
will I see you before I go?
A chance to say goobye?
I love(d) you...though

come let us make peace atleast
It will create an invisible bond
Well I think so now...
not till I have forgotten...

My love will miss you
I will need you day to day
I wont give up then
even though I still do
but yeah... I'm done!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The unforgettable love, but sad news they have to be apart. love you still but better to leave than being unhappy and being played up.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ezediuno Louis Odinakaose 01 November 2012

I HADN'T READ DIS WEN I SAID UR WORK IS /ARE SINCER AND REAL... AND I LIK UR FLOW... DECISION MAKIN EVEN WHEN U DONT WANA... SHOWS THE POET A STRONG PERSON RUNIN AGAINST UR OWN WILL... DESIRE...FEELINS.... EMOTION MIXED LIK.... LIK SWEET AND BETTER.... CUP OF COFFEE I CAL IT. UR LINES AM FALLIN INLOV WT. that is/was my birthday.... love(d) you...though. HOW U MERGED THE PRESENT AND PAST 2GEDA SHOW CONTINUITY.... GREAT WORK

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