I Love You Poem by Juwon Daniel

I Love You



when i lose my charms and glamour
when i'm old and winkle;
when i cannot look myself in the mirror;
i will always stare at you, because i love you

if winkles must to be written on our brows, let them not be written upon thy heart of which we share, the spirit should never grow old because i love u.

the breaking-up of lovers is like a masquerade party, when the mask are dropped affectionately, but you know some how life doesn't always pay off to those who are most insistent, but to those who are persistent to the ways through it, that's just the reason why i love you.

it is quoted that, 'success is not the key to happiness, but happiness is the key to success, because i love what i'm doing and i know doing it will make me successful, that's because i love u;

you know a turtle will always make progress only when he stick is neck out; this makes me go in search of you and i noticed i made progress finding you; because i love you

i'm living my life for you and with you alone, because to get a worthy living i must live for another persons' life of which is yours, that's because i love you

the tragedy in life is not so much what we suffer, but rather what we miss an what we cherish, which is why i love you.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
To love is not a simple yes or no, all we need is to be confidential and be truthful with our life of loving. for love says 'be desperate not; be affectionate always' that's is what love desires
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mysia Hayling 28 November 2014

The poem is a nice one although it has a few grammatical errors, I think you should fix. However other than that a very lovely piece of work.

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