I Love You Poem by Akhtar Jawad

I Love You

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To me you're not a lovely one,
To me you're the one, only one,
To me you're not like a moon,
To me you're beauty of a boon,
To me you're not simply a flower,
To me you're a fine flowering shower,
To me you're not a moment's fragrance,
To me you're sweet smell of endurance,
To me you're not helpful and nice,
To me you're a model of self sacrifice,
To me you're not merely a need,
To me you're an eternal living deed,

I remember the day when we met,
What did I say? How can I forget!

For me, you are made, for you I shall die,
Look into my eyes and say it's a lie.
"I love you." is so much abused,
Your smile now says, you are amused,
Although I am a teen aged boy,
But I don't want to play with a toy,
My heart says, " She and only she"
No one else I want to see,
No more, none else, nothing more,
Starring at your ways and crazy in adore,
I want a doll for the whole of my life,
Loyalty I assure and assure no strife,

Saturday, May 31, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: i love you
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A blending of past and present.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalida Bano Ali 05 February 2017

A beautiful and attractive poem......................................................

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Khalid Saifullah 04 March 2015

A nice expression of emotions................10

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Kirti Sharma 02 June 2014

This poem is so sweet...... First stanza says it all!

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Naima Ansari 01 June 2014

Oh! It's quite a heart-touching poem.So beautifully it depicts your meeting with your lover.I really adore this poem.

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Amitava Sur 31 May 2014

Akhtar vai, though you say... I love you. is so much abused, but I loved your I LOVE YOU with my heart's content.

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