I Love You Poem by jasmine muthoni

I Love You

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You know i love you.
i guess that´s why you dont watch what to you say to me
you know i love you
but that aint weakness, that doesnt define me
you know i love you.
but eventually i´ll walk away
yeah well, at the moment am still here and yes i´ll call you, cz i miss you
cz i love you. i´ll assume she´s your cousin and the lip stick stain
on your shirt is ketchup
you know i love you.
But you dont love me, you watch me waste away
cz you know i love you
it seems hard maybe am just scared of being alone
and cz i love you i dont want to lose you.
Okay, you want me gone but what if i dont want to go?
what if i want to hold on a little longer?
Surely i cant let you go i love you. atleast you once loved me
i can i live with that
am ebullient with you
i dont want to be forlorn i love you and impervious i´ll be
to all your actions.
this is not about dignity or my wounded pride
this is about love i do this for i love you and i dont want to stop loving you
indeed am a fool for you.
I`m beleaguered for i love you and i`m indignant for you misuse me
i cant walk away and assume you never existed thats a lie
and am not going to live in such harsh conditions.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
majid Alsaady 25 July 2010

repition exposed the lover/sacrifice even dignity is a sign of deep love / the mind being troubled by the heart feels lonely / cant stop loving /once charmed love makes you weak/ that is what your poem exposed / very nice and simple language.thanks for pleasure of the complete surrender to love

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Dr.subhendu Kar 20 July 2010

heart when latches on to love deep, evocative too, thanks for sharing

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veronique buea pre 20 July 2010

wow that is wonderful i loved it!

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Marina Gasbey 20 July 2010

Awwww! That is so sweet! But very sad... I'm sorry if you've had loss... Marina...

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