I Love U... Poem by choco pie shreyasi

I Love U...

Rating: 4.7


something very magical,
something very spiritual,
something very mystical.
something to feel,
something to believe,
something to say,
something to convey,
something for u,
that i love u...

a belief very natural,
it is very real,
to run fast around the field,
to feel surrounded by guild.
something very harmonious,
a magical ditty,
to feel different and pretty.
something to smile,
something to care.
something about u,
that i love u...
sometimes love to be lonely,
thinking about u only...
love to feel the magic in the breeze,
sometimes love to dance in rain,
feeling very fain.
something to be ninny,
something to be pinny.
so, much to tell about u,
that the words,
from my mind blew,
not something! !
it's all about u,
that i love u...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shreyasi B 30 November 2012

thanku so much! ! for ur precious comment! ! :)

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Sakalabaktula Sairaj 31 October 2017

so nice mam keep it up do more ok

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Roseann Shawiak 02 September 2015

Feelings of love making one feel giddy with joy, having fun just loving them unconditionally, no strings attached. Felt a sense of liberty and freedom in this poem that I really enjoyed! A precious innocence is seen underlying the surface of your poem. Love it! Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 August 2015

magical, spiritual, mystical something to feel, to believe, to say, to convey......... it all ends up in I love you. i hope and pray that your expectations of love and romance remain for long.. thank you

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paresh rao 21 August 2015

Magical,spiritual,harmonical...... Precious for me....

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Shreyasi B 30 November 2012

thanku so much... for ur precious comment :)

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