I Lost You Poem by Candice Rastede

I Lost You

Rating: 5.0


I said I'd never lose you,
just one little thing went wrong.

Just save me from this little game.
Just tell me it was all so fake.

I need you here,
I lost you.

You said I'm not a true friend,
but I say if you cry over them thats pretty true.

If only you would see,
if only.

But you won't forgive me.
I never meant to hurt you.

Just one little thing went wrong.
And it ended it all.

Forever.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Surya . 07 June 2009

sensitive and touching poem posted10 surya

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Joseph Poewhit 16 May 2009

Sometimes those little things become big things

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Kesav Easwaran 16 May 2009

love is a funny game Candice...at times you find you are thrown out into a pool of no water...good write...the lines there bring out well the disappointment and sorrow and the pain inside...10

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Vikash Kumar 16 May 2009

You have expressed very well in very simple words...Emotions are flowing in all the words...Keep it up

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Vikash Kumar 16 May 2009

You have expressed very well in very simple words...Emotions are flowing in all the words...Keep it up

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