I Look Into My Wonders... Poem by Lorene Erwin

I Look Into My Wonders...

Rating: 5.0


I see two people from where I am. One is a male, one is a female. Early aged couple... I would say that their early twenties. I think they are in love. They are happy in their words and jesters. Laughter in the air...Love amongst it somewhere...
As I further watch with anticipation, My mind wonders.

Love so sweet, Like the smell of a gardinia on a warm summer day.
Love so sweet, Like a blue bird or a red bird singing, as I saw them, they flew away...

as it starts to drizzle rain, The two imbrace and then walk away....

I look into my wonders
I look into my thoughts
As clouds grow near

I see two people from where I am. One is male and one is female.
they are I would say in thier thirties. I think they are having
troubles. They are troubled in thier words and jesters. Tears in the air...Hurt amongest it somewhere...Music playing loud.
As I watch more with anticipation, My mind wonders.



Light summer rain, Flowers in a breeze...Just let it free...

Cool Breeze as sweat folds off my nose...

I look into my wonders
I look into my thoughts
as clouds grow closer

In the music I hear a hurricane, The thunder roars, as it rolled off the streak of light.

A storm in my mind, am I going crazy
No I actually think I am alright.

A beautiful sound it could all bring...
My mind sounds true in the words I make
A color I can see, light like the night life in a large city watching and wondering where my minds gone....


I look into my wonders
I loved the color that love brought!
I look into my thoughts
I loved the sound that love brought
as the clouds clear, I see a burst of sunshine
as it peaks from behind the clouds
I love the smell of happiness...

I see from where I am, A female in her early fourties

Wondering...searching...with anticipation Looking into her own thoughts
I want to know her.

Look into my wonders
I look into my thoughts
Love where did you go?
I sure hope to see you again one day.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siddharth Singh 15 July 2009

That you have written a lovely piece, is no wonder.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 14 July 2009

look into my wonders I loved the color that love brought! I look into my thoughts I loved the sound that love brought.................... art of love dazzles on the rungs of cascade yet we rave up by its song painting with colors.......eloquent exposition of love as it flows by the life, wrought ingenious by metaphors and imagery,10++++, thanks for sharing

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Lorene Erwin

Lorene Erwin

Birmingham, Alabama
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