I Left Hurriedly Poem by Mbusya Wa Mbusya

I Left Hurriedly

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I left the new clothes in my hut,
I wore a tattered jeans and a hat,
My first step almost broke my heart,
The oxen of Joe pulled me in a cart.

I took twelve days towards freedom,
That road itself had pangs of boredom,
I let myself imagine all kinds of stardom,
Then it turned out to be a mere fiefdom.

I wrote back to Joe after a while,
And supposed things weren't volatile,
It was a long sad letter but undocile,
I had missed home so much in my exile.

I left memories hurriedly,
I left the fanfare quietly,
I left everything friendly,
I found some peace finally!

Tuesday, January 29, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: sad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Titus senior 22 February 2019

what a nice poem. I like the rhyme and the rhythm created. A simple poem with a strong message.

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Norah 11 February 2019

Amazing poems

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 January 2019

oh we have to leave all and these leaving becomes hurriedly, quietly, finally and remind friendly tears.....//// lovely poem; enjoyed I

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Gajanan Mishra 29 January 2019

Left everything friendly, good write

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