I Lay Poem by Amber Mull

I Lay

Rating: 5.0


In bed i lay
sore and beat
sining soft words
to give hope
to my sweet
to protect and love
what others dont see
and keep it going


* to be continued i must go now#

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 September 2009

to my sweet to protect and love what others dont see and keep it going...................sincere desire coupled with honesty adn that is what is needed dear.... lovely theme with frank admission.....10 read mine mary to marry.....mis i miss you... a place called home

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