I Just Cant... Poem by millie st.claire

I Just Cant...

Rating: 5.0


What do you do,
when you have so much inside?
What do you do,
when you so stuff to hide?

I cant go on,
without you in my life
I cant release all the anger inside.

You make me strong,
when im weak

Happy when im sad,
and lovely when i just dont feel like smilin'.

What do you do,
when you have so much inside?
What do you do,
when you have stuff to hide?

I want to say i love you,
I want to say i care,
but i just cant go on.

I want to believe in you,
I want to be with you.

But i just cant, so what do you do?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Surya . 07 June 2009

a very nice poem.concluding para is very good ' want to believe in you, I want to be with you. But i just cant, so what do you do? ' voted10 surya

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Kyle Shield Laster 16 July 2008

like the struggle going on. and format is great too. another nice piece.

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Joey Habib 08 July 2008

yo fo'real you got it... i like reading your poems they say alot of the same things that im feeling to... its gr8 stuff... keep it movin....

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