I Have A Soul Poem by Guenael Roodjerry Oristel

I Have A Soul

Rating: 2.0


She is walking barefoot on the dirt ground full of rocks and nails,
with clothes ripe all over her body.
Her legs at nights are like an open door,
welcoming the master to give her children.
She works in the field under the hot sun on her back,
sweating, crying and thinking,
I maybe dark as a darkness sir, but, I have a soul.
I am not just a dog, lying on its back, welcoming children day in and day out.
I have a soul.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 18 November 2013

This is a fine example of free verse well spoken with a hint of mystery. It shows that you have the potential for expression of emotion that emanates from good poetry. Read mine – Everybody has had Somebody – Adeline Hint: no double space

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