I Feel Like Crying, Poem by Broken Angel

I Feel Like Crying,

Rating: 4.5


and i don't know why,
maybe its because I'm happy?
...
I've cried my few tears for the day,
sometimes happy,
sometimes sad,
but in the end,
its all for some purpose.
...
One purpose for today,
is because,
i feel like i couldn't help you my friend,
even though you told me i did.
...
I wish i could do more then,
just being here,
only to be someone to talk to,
I'm not all to sure,
what more i could do,
but i know i could do much more.
...
Please help me,
in understanding what more i can do,
so that maybe,
the next cry's,
are of happiness,
and not of feeling that i cant help.
.
..
...
..
.
: : end: :

written: 1/29/06

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ndidi Ubogu 08 February 2006

smile baby! no more tears......................... it is a nice poem

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***** ********* 30 January 2006

Well you certainly didn't cry because of happiness Broken Angel. I love your name by the way. I enjoyed the poem. It is so frustrating, when you want to reach out and comfort or encourage someone, you know who needs it, but they won't or can't take your hand. I am gonna make a little birdhouse in my soul, (a line from a favourite song) so broken angels can also get a little rest.10 from Tai

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