I didn't like it
when I saw you
mirrored within me...
I didn't like it
when my critical mind
recognized your weaknesses
manifest within myself...
passed on through what... DNA...?
perhaps through the theater
of life observed by an innocent mind...?
Oh sweet soul... surrender
to the beauty of divergence
sluff off the shards of life's
magnetic forces drawn to
hater's energy destroying.
9/19/09
Shirley your poems put off a kinetic vibe that slows my thoughts allowing me to ponder deeper on many levels. You have been a kind soul and I value your work. - Jerry
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Deep & thoughtful. Thanks for sharing. I didn't like it when I saw you mirrored within me.... This caught me with a smile.... how visionary! ! Bless. Leonard