I Deserve To Live Too Poem by Dr Kamran Haider Bukhari

I Deserve To Live Too

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The wild days of mercurial surge
The tranquil nights of deep hypnosis
The gloomy fall of animated hues
The blooming spring of divine hopes
The unexpected rain
From the eyes of dying innocence
The dejected deserts of burning thirst
The aromatic enigma of stripped skins
And the ecstatic charisma of hidden treasures
I deserve to live these too

Today
Innocence is crying for corruption
Wisdom is pleading for ignorance
Piety is yearning for seduction
And the little evil is begging for acceptance

I am just a lesser human
My Lord
You made me to err
I fell
Because you wanted me to
And I’ll rise
As that’s my fate
Betwixt
Do I deserve to live?
With the freedom of my soul

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naidz Ladia 12 March 2009

never surrender to the consequences that are existing...dont let failures be the hindrance of every success....fight for every trials...you must know that you should live too...cheers to this poem of yours...it is nicely written.. naizz

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Catrina Heart 12 March 2009

We all deserve to live for we have received God's gift and that is life. We are only human being made not perfect to live in this world, for God has given us free will and intellect...........the right of choice between what is right and what is wrong....to do good and to avoid evil....Unfortunately, even with these special gifts people still loss on their journey their right path because, they always use their instincts in decision making in order to survive rather than the intelligence they have..............nice composition sir...........10+++

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Joseph Poewhit 12 March 2009

Poem goes into deep mediative thoughts about life's existence and roads of thoughts

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