I Can'T Breathe Poem by Kristie Isaak

I Can'T Breathe

Rating: 5.0


deep pain.........its hurting me
my heart empty.........what happened to thee
chest tight.........dont say those hurtful words
friend comes running.........theres no laughing
rush of rain........all i see are clear skies
makeup smeared.........im all in tears
gimme that towel.........blue as his eyes

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 07 April 2008

ease your pain by extricating the unwanted pleasures............

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this is so good. my favorite was the last line. it kinda gave insight to what the poem is about...or maybe i'm reading too much into it. either way, i like it.

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Ninja Kitten 06 December 2007

luv it the part i liked was chest tight, don't say those hurtful words, i give that line to my ex.

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Jona`e Levett 09 November 2007

thats so sad. my favorite line...: rush of rain.....all i see are clear skies. that made the poem. i loved it!

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