I Can Become Poem by lily montes

I Can Become



i can become what i wish to be
you hold me tight not in embrce
in hostility
not by force but by mind
i cannot brake free
to me i am stuck but to you i am merely
frustrated and cannot think straight
i try again and again
my thoughts are a jumble
a thought shines through all others
i can become what i wish to be
i can leave
i can run
i cn cry
i can laugh
i can be me for the very firsttime
under hostile cages and locks
i finally break free
i am now me whoever i may be

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 14 October 2012

i can be me for the very firsttime under hostile cages and locks i finally break free so, you have decided to take your books and study hard to get good grades to go to university? so you have picked up a good hobby and try to learn about it and be someone in future? so you want to be an athlete, who is practicing day and night to represent your school in the next athlete meet to be selected for the some other games? Beautiful! LIly Montes!

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Sandra Feldman 14 October 2012

Very good, self assertion, always healthy, especially when so nicely expressed

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