I Believe You: Tanka Poem by Roh Mih

I Believe You: Tanka

Rating: 2.8


You say there were
shooting stars last night,
I believe you;
I saw them
in your eyes this morning.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Allen Vinal 14 December 2004

Not bad at all, Roh. Excellent use of an ironic device through metaphor.

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