I Am With You Poem by Luwi Habte

I Am With You

Rating: 4.9


You have a promise for unending life
So where should I go out of you Jesus?
This is my choice for ever
I can`t live far from your house dear
I am going to follow you ever and after

Everything I do is in your blessed way
I don`t want to stay apart for a second of a day
I don`t want to be apart from you
I can`t found like you even if i want it to

Me my self and I are loving you a lot and increases daily
We are telling that we will never to be apart from you, never to be
We are walking after you continuously
Looking after your footprints, never to tired

Being with you is the relief of my self
In front of your face is my reliable
When i do the struggle for your praise
You let me up with full of appreciation and blessed face

Instead of decades in the houses of evil spirits game
I prefer to stay with you until the rest and all the time
Every bad and good stuffs that happen to me
If it is not your type, let it lost for ever
Let me lose it for the rest of my life

Compliment to the Lord! ! !

Amen

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 20 June 2009

Good write but u got a few errors please read over

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Anjali Sinha 21 June 2009

excellent poem do keep it up writing thus -10 anjali

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Vinod Kumar 23 June 2009

Yes We are all the incarnated idols of the almighty, actually this is the ultimate truth, and what we are viewing through our sense is not the complete world, it is only a half part, the other half, we should find out with closed eyes there we can find out the fulfilness and the ultimate realisation that is told you in your wonderful work, well done, thanks,10++

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Afzal Shauq 30 June 2009

Being with you is the relief of my self In front of your face is my reliables When i do the struggle for your praise You let me up with full of appreciation and blessed face good stanza of richly done poem 10+++++++++++++++++++

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Intan Rianda 17 July 2009

it's amazing! i like your poems a lot! !

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 26 November 2009

A serial chant of prayer…well prayed. May you be fulfilled... Ten Ms. Nivedita UK Please read and comment &c my new post Recipe of First Kiss. niv

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 September 2009

Being with you is the relief of my self In front of your face is my reliable When i do the struggle for your praise You let me up with full of appreciation and blessed face.so honest and sincere feeling from heart and tht is what is need for the day to almighty.. he is there to lead and guide but what we lack is sincerity and double standard. go whole heatedly and then he wil hear your prayer fo rsure.....10 read mine o, lord..prayer/...humble submission and i am disgrace

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Ershad Mazumder 14 September 2009

I like this piece. Very good. Keep on writing.

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Hazem Al Jaber 10 September 2009

great i love that, very gentle poem with a very good rhyme. hazemal..

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Rajaram Ramachandran 31 August 2009

I am very much impressed with your prayer to Jesus. This should be the attitude of anyone who loves Jesus for all his sacrifices for this mankind.

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