I Am With You Poem by Valsa George
I Am With You
I know some deep pain saddens you
It has been nesting in your heart for long
Breeding in the silence of your soul
It leaves furrows on your brow
It intensifies with every deepening night
Leaving the wound in your heart severely bleeding
Something that you don't want to divulge
Robbing all your cheer and ebullience away,
I can feel the smouldering of your heart
How I wish I could fan away those aches
Wipe off all the gloom from your mind
Or at least share a bit of it, my dear!
Even when you wear a mask impenetrable
You might wonder how I know of it
Is it telepathy that I can read your thoughts?
Sense the rising palpitations of your heart?
When I see your struggle to cover up your pain
And put on a smile that is not genuine
How I wish to alleviate your pain
Staying by your side, wiping those tears away
Though far, please know I am quite near
Somewhere so close, round the corner
I am with you as an unseen presence
Praying for you ever and wishing you all good
Life is strange with sudden twists and turns
But never ever give up, nor lose hope
Believe, at any time there can be a turn around
It's a often after a bleary night comes the bright morn
Again the sun shall show up in the East
Darkness will recede and light shall descend
When meadows with dew drops shall shine
And woods with the song of birds will smile
Walk in the open inhaling fresh air
Enjoy the plants bursting into bloom
Listen to the birds' melodious calling and cooing
And think of all the blessings heaped on you in galore
Look up to God in issues you cannot handle
Call Him to your aid when with problems you battle
He cannot but yield to the voice of your calling
And instantly heal your heart deeply bleeding
Look up to God in issues you cannot handle Call Him to your aid when with problems you battle He cannot but yield to the voice of your calling And instantly heal your heart deeply bleeding Valsa, nowadays I am facing a few problems, mostly emotional, when I read this poem I took it as a message to look up to God. Fleeting of mind sometimes forced me to doubt about God but every time after thinking I found Him and went back to Him with an unconditional surrender. Your proved to be a boon for me...........10
Very inspiring Very cooling Very soothing and after reading this amazing piece I got back my confidence a bit, got relieved from weary mind that sometimes I fall into.....Valsa....really very well composed and I love your every creation...10/10
Look up to God in issues you cannot handle Call Him to your aid when with problems you battle An excellent poem portraying prayer for the sack of a friend who is undergoing torture and pain.Emotionally well motivated poem.Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Indeed, Prof. Valsa never stops piercing our soul with her succinct and emotional poems. After reading this poem, I felt so much inspired and motivated. Aside its artistic beauty, it speaks to the soul in a language that is comprehensible and appealing. This is a great poem. Well done!
I can feel the smouldering of your heart How I wish I could fan away those aches Wipe off all the gloom from your mind Or at least share a bit of it, my dear! ....powerful expression loaded with tons of emotion. A fabulous poem....top score!
Even when you wear a mask impenetrable / You might wonder how I know of it / Is it telepathy that I can read your thoughts? / Sense the rising palpitations of your heart? ....here the word telepathy is properly used which brings a deep emotion of life. Indeed it is a lovely poem on life having an impressive inscription.10
Liked the ultimate stanza. I concur with the great Poetess in invoking the aid of Almighty God in all problems we encountered in life.
The ability of the great Poetess to understand and share the feelings of another is vividly portrayed in this marvelous write. It shows a woman of great character.
A wonderful poem that conveys kindness, care and love. Each and every line is very touching. A heartfelt write that whoever can read will feel the love and compassion pouring from the heart of the great Poetess.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Beautiful poem Valsa, it really touched my soul. Each words as if poured out from your heart. Really one love to hear those words. So cooling and soothing to heart and relaxes the mind. I loved reading each lines. Beautiful presentation.