I Am Listening Poem by ANJANDEV ROY

I Am Listening

Rating: 5.0


The old and feeble man is
Lying in his bed,
He is very ill,
Suddenly he anxiously says,
"It's coming,
I am listening,
It's the last sound
Of the great whistle,
I know it's for me,
Yes, it's surely for me,
I have to go now."

Sunday, November 15, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 16 November 2020

A wonderful write dear Anjandev! Make it a habit of writing something daily. Knowledge and experience comes with age. Be a long distance runner. God bless you!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 November 2020

A well penned poem. Truly splendid and poetic....5 stars*****

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Susan Williams 15 November 2020

This demonstrates the power of a well-chosen title coupled to an intriguing beginning two lines to get the readers' rapt attention! ! Top marks!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 15 November 2020

GOOD HE GOT AN ADVANCE WARNING ELSE HE WOULD HAVE BEEN TAKEN BY SURPRISE GLAD YOU MET HIM BEFORE HIS LAST WHISTLINFG AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA RRRRRRRRRRR BE HAPPY FOR HIM

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