I am
Holding your eyes
Hostage
But
Your Mind
is free
to
wander
short, simple and very much to the point... nice one -Eila
so succinct yet mischievously clever! i love it! Jake
Nice beginning I would like to see more of this in detail Tell me more about the eyes; Why is the others persons mind wandering where does it go.
I like how simply you tell it. Hail to the power of persuasion!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
VERY GOOD, ..............