Like a mirage a crazy I sometimes come to the surface from the deepest depth of the ocean, program our environment according to its own choice and start driving the car with an eerie speed & twist; the crest and trough change unpredictably and therefore mesmerize the traffic police!
Then it becomes not easy for us to know which pen is used to write the poem actually! If you explore, you can't defy its effect. For you it's the testing time.
On your way you might see a pitcher upside down!
On your way you might see a pitcher upside down! .....here is the essence of the poem. A great philosophical write hauntingly presented. Thanks for sharing.
Let me cut in pieces for easy digestion. I hope you don't mind.
(cont.) .... i like the silly picture, but maybe i would not call 'it' a pitcher [a container, not baseball pitcher! ] my first impressions, reading the poem, ARE: is he on drugs? and some humor/humour here it is entertaining, but not quite my cup of tea. i might call the poem/poet kooky, but that is not always bad! bri :) here: Like a mirage a crazy I... i think you MIGHT want commas on either side of a crazy; i'm not sure WHAT you 'want'.
Pitcher (container) From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia In American English, a pitcher is a container with a spout used for storing and pouring contents which are liquid in form. In English speaking countries outside North America, a jug is any container with a handle and a mouth and spout for liquid—American pitchers are more likely to be called jugs elsewhere.[citation needed] Generally a pitcher also has a handle, which makes pouring easier.....(cont.)
Testing time! ! With the fragrance of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yes, human life is to explore the boundary permitted, well drafted, thanks for sharing
Dear poet, thank you very much for making such an inspiring comment.