Hypocrite(Rewrite Of Origional Poem By Oluko George) Poem by Vincent Toll

Hypocrite(Rewrite Of Origional Poem By Oluko George)

Rating: 5.0


When I want you to hold me,
You deceive me and take my hand,
And make me believe you care.

My heart longs for Love,
Not a physical embrace,
I need Someone that cares.

You act like you care and
You give me your hand,
But it’s your love I need.

When I say that I love you,
You reply “I Love You”
With a hushed tone.


Inside of your heart lies,
The untold truth that is
Revealed through your eyes.

They are happy and sad within,
You always just seemed,
To be on my side.

When the time comes,
It will always stand by me,
It will always Push you away.

It will always reveal the truth to you,
Time will eat you away until,
You cant take it any longer.


It Will make you,
Scream Out,
“I Don’t LOVE You! ”

Is it that easy for you
To just simply pretend,
That you love me?

Do you receive some kind,
Of sick pleasure from,
Messing with my emotions.

You say that you care,
But you deceive me
Each and every day.



In the end we find out
You never actually cared,
About me in the least.

Now the pain that has
been inflicted upon me,
shows just how much you care!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Oluko George 01 September 2009

am so happy for that impressive work you have done...

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Muhammad Ali 30 March 2009

Lovely poem friend, very smooth 10

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